Many Face-ups for Critique

So hey guys, ^_^ I recently took a few free commissions to help build my face-up portfolio. I was hoping I could get a bit of feedback. Also: Do you think I should open up a shop?

The WS Ryeon is mine, both awake and sleeping heads. The MNF Luka girl is my friend's, she asked me to redo the face up on her three heads. Maxxie asked me to do face ups for her Beyla heads, which was awesome and they were so cute. They were my first tiny heads ever, so how small they were was pretty tricky.

Okay, pictures. ^^;

My Ryeon:






Friend's Luka:





Please Note: Her left eyebrow is purposely more arched, she has a very sassy character.

Maxxie's Beyla, Human and Unicorn:






Apologies for the semi-wonky images. ;_; Photobucket went weird...

Thanks in advance! *^^*

your faceups are beautiful!

Thank you, Poiizu! ^^ I'm very glad you think so.

Great face-ups! I especially love the unicorn Beyla's, it fits the classic Soom mold :3